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| Subject: Makai Kasai Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:33 am | |
| (spoke with Aemi Stronghold) Exorcist Basic InformationName: Makai kasai -- Nickname: The Reaper, Shi no kama no Makai (Makai of the Death Scythe), Chi basu Makai (Blood Bath Makai) and Gyakusatsu no ō (King of the Slaughtered), Raijin (God of Lightning) --- Special Title: Critical Point Breaker (To be recruited) Gender: Male Age: 28 (But looks 23) Weight: 350lbs Height: 8 foot tall Loyalty: Neutral Birth-date: November 9th Place of Birth: Kyoto, Japan Place of Living: The Black Order European Branch (Until is recruited) Personality: Makai Kasai is a very calm and collected individual. Makai's face is always in a neutral position making it impossible to read his movements. He speaks in a monotone voice preferring not to show any sort of emotion. He enjoys being by himself and dislikes noise. Makai can switch from his cold nature to a violent one when he is disturbed by loud noise. he hates crowds and prefers to be by himself. His eyes hold no emotion in them making it look as if you’re looking into a sea of darkness a frightening experience for most. His voice is cold enough to send shivers up your spine and cover you in goose bump. He will not talk to others only when it is needed often just sitting by himself reading. In battle however he is a brutal killer showing no mercy to his foes. He will kill every last one of them in an instant with no hit of remorse. He will coat himself in blood and despite the injuries he will suffer he will continue on having grown accustom to pain and his injuries to the point he rarely feels anything. In battle at the first sign of blood the bloodlust will over power him and he will rush in laughing like a demon slaughtering his enemies if his comrades get in his way from the bloodlust he won't recognise them and will end up killing them by mistake. Appearance: - Spoiler:
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Makai is an 8 foot tall male his eyes are blood red with black snake like slits inside for pupils. His skin is pale white, whiter than even snow. He has an athletic build but with broad shoulders and muscle but not to much. He has numerous tattoos across his body along with scars and burns. His entire body is covered in a large number of scars made from numerous bladed weapons; he has scars from whips along with burn marks that never healed. His hair is pitch black and spiked reaching his ankles when let down but he wears it in a high ponytail so it reaches mid back Makai wears a long black battle robe that covers his hands. He has a long black high collared cloak over the top. He wears long black trousers. He carries his three scythes across his back to help for endurance, speed and strength training. Makai carries numerous hidden weapons on him from simple knives to chains. He has two holsters on each leg containing shuriken and kunai knives. He has three belts around his waist with pouches at the back containing various poison bombs, smoke bombs and flash bombs along with medical supplies. The first of Makai's scythes is large 8 foot scythe with a blade on each side back to back. The blades are around 5 foot long are and crimson red. The handle it pitch black. Both the handles and blades are made of titanium making them difficult to break not impossible but improbable. A long titanium chain is attached at the end of the scythe around 15 metres long. Along the design of the handle is a blood red Chinese dragon its mouth wide open. The scythe is incredibly heavy and only very few can carry it the first scythe is known as Desusaizu (Death Scythe). Makai's next scythe is a 4 foot scythe with a grey handle and a black blade made of titanium as well known as Tenbatsu (Damnation). On the back of the scythe opposite its 5 foot blade is a small blade around thirty centimetres in length, The scythe has a 15 metre chain wrapped around it made of titanium as well. Makai final scythe is the Jigoku no Shinzoku. The scythe is 5 foot long the handle pitch black with a bone like design wrapped around its edge shaped like someone’s spike. A skull at the top with a blade coming out the back of the skull the skulls eyes blood red. Attached to the end of the scythe is a long black 15 metre chain Anti-Akuma Weapon InformationWeapon Type: Chain Scythe Weapon Class: Equip Weapon Appearance: A 8 foot scythe with a blade on each side back to back. The blades are around 5 foot long are and crimson red. The handle it pitch black. Both the handles and blades are made of titanium making them difficult to break not impossible but improbable. A long titanium chain is attached at the end of the scythe around 15 metres long. Along the design of the handle is a blood red Chinese dragon its mouth wide open. The scythe is incredibly heavy and only very few can carry it the first scythe is known as Desusaizu (Death Scythe). Weapon Abilities: Makai's scythe has its innocence infused with the core of the weapon giving it the odd ability to generate raw powered electricity. When his scythe generates this electricty Makai will be able to channel it into his own body for his own techniques or use whats in his scythe to hone it into a hiogh powered attack. - moves through innocence:
Name: Denki sukin (Electrical Skin) Description:The Denki sukin is something makai has developed over time from using his innocence. Every time he used his innocence his physiology changed to the degree that high powered electricty to even being struck by lightning will know longer hurt him as his entire body has been turned into one giant conducting rod making him perfect for his innocence as his body was struck by electricty that much that is phsyically changed itself. Name: Kaminari honryū (Lightning Torrent) Description: The Kaminari honryū is a technique created by Makai used during the activation of his innocence. Makai will activate his innocence and generate a large amount of raw electricity in his scythe. he will impale the ground his chain wrapped around his waist. The electricty will move from his scythe up throough his chain and into Makai's entire body where he can channel it to his finger tips and release the electricty in the form of ten lightning shaped bolts from his finger tips. Once these bolts of electricity hit there target the electricty will course through his victims body. To a human the voltage released by the ten bolts of electricty is enough to kill them
Name: Kaminari o seifuku suru ( conquering lightning) Description: Makai will activate the innocence inside his scythe to release a large amount of raw electricity. The electricity will move into the arm Makai is holding his scythe with. His chain wrapped around his arm as he holds his scythe the tip aimed at his opponent. The electricty will surge around his arm as he continues to generate electricty frrom his innocence to that point his arm is no longer visibile nor is his scythe. he will then aim the end of his scythe and from the point fir e acocnentrated blast of raw electrical energy. The energy will be concentrated as a small beam with the force to easily shoot through raw akuma flesh to even punch a hole in solid steel.
Name: Reijingu Boruto (Raging Bolt) Description: Makai after activating his innocence will generate a large amount of raw electricity in his scythe. He will spin his scythe and aim it at the sky firing a large bolt of electricty shaped like lightning up into the air. The electric bolt will then descend crashing down on top of his victim giving them a alrge electrical shock enough to kill off an akuma depending on the amount of electricty released but the minimal amount will be enought o kill a human in an instant.
Name: Kaminari Den (Lightning Palace) Description: after activating his innocence Makai will generate electricty into his scythe. Sparks of electricty will shoot off into the air turning into yellow spheres the size of soccer balls each of them charged with raw electricty.Makai will generate a total of twelve of these yellow spheres each filled with raw electricity. Makai will control the orbs using them as air support. The orbs when they attack will glwo bright yellow and shoot electric bolts in the shape of lightning bolts at Makai's targets. The bolts designed on the power are used to sun for the weak bolts while the stronger ones used to deal out damage but delivering rather nasty electrical shocks.
Name: Denki Uchiwake-ken (electrical Break down Fist) Description: As he actives his innocence his scythe will release a large burst of electricty which will move into his right first. The electricty will shape into a large fist made entirely of electricty. He will punch mid air firing the fist. When it strikes it will release the electricty to paralyse those hit by the fist,.
Name: Denki Hōtengeki (Electrical Heavenward Halberd) Description: makai wll activate his innocence generatinga large amount of electricty inside his scythe. he will grip the handle like a spear holding the chain with the opposite arm and then toss his scythe once enough electricty has been generated inside it.T hef irst hit will be from the electricty sending a large surge of it through the victims body. The second strike is from the scythe as the blades are aimed to cut right through makai's target.
Name: Denki sattō (Eletrical Stampede) Description: Makai will activate his innocence and have it generate a large amount of electricy that will encase his entire scythe. On the blades of his scythes electricty will extend from them in the sahe pf two bull horns.He will send his scythe flying forward using its chain the chain will be encased in electricty during this technique. As the scythe flyies forward the horns will be able to extend up to five metres giving the technique an even greater range
Name: Gyaku ni Denki (Electrical Reverse) Description: Makai will gerate electricty into his scythe after activating his innocence. The electricty will move into his right or left hand forming a large sphere. He will then strike the ground with it send bolts of electricty through the ground to strike anyone around him touching the earth.
Name: Kaminari no hōkō (Roar of Thunder) Description: The Kaminaro no Hoko is a style of combat designed by Makai. After activating his innocence he will place his scythe on his back as it generates electricty to course through his body and thanks to his electrical skin he won't be affected. He will then use the electric energy from his scythe to perform electrical attacks enhancing every strike he makes as he is able to release the pent up electricty on contact giving his nemy a rather nasty shock depending on the amount released only capable of being used thanks to his electric skin.
Name: Raijin (Lightning God) Description: This is makai's greatest move only used after he is at full power with his innocence. His innocence will generate a large amount of electricty that will encase his entire body forming something akin to samurai armour. This armour if hit will repair itself in an instant through the raw electricty generated by his innocence. He will hold his massive scythe which will b encased by Electricty to take the form of a massive double bladed sword made entirely of electricty. This technique will enable Makai to use his electricty as freely as he wishes. In this form his armour acts to block injuries from hitting himbut if his armour doesn't regenerate quick enough he'll be struck. THis armour is used to increase Makai's physical speed, endurance and strength beyond normal capablities. At the end when this technique is deactivated all the damage his armour sustained his armour the electricty used will come back on hikm with such force his electric skin will not be able to keep up. From this he ofgten winds up unconscious for a week or two.
Name: Denki Ryu (Electrical Dragon) Description: This technique can only be performed when Makai is in his Raijin mode. As the electricty is generated from his scythe he will hold out his left hand creating a sphere of electricty. The sphere will shoot forward taking the form of a giant serpentine dragon that will shoot through the air its jaws wide open as its goal is to swallow its target and collapse on them burst into an electrical storm on the inside of there body to kill them
Makai's Scythes- Makai’s fighting styles:
Name: Hone o naku (Crying bones) Description: The crying bones is a style of hand to hand combat invented by Makai. When used he will use fast and precise and powerful strikes to attack his enemies bones to break them. His attacks can also be used on there internal organs if he aims for bone fragments that when they break to fly off into there organs. Each strike is used to shatter or snap bones. it can also be used that with each attack it is used in wearing the bones down so they will break on there own when the enemy moves.
Name: Kama no odori Kichigai (Mad Dance of Scythes) Description: The Kama no Odori Kichigai is a style of scythe based combat that revolves around the use of multiple chain scythes. The style is used by the wielder constantly attacking the opponent with a chain and scythe sending the scythe or chain flying at them and once they retract they send another. The style completely revolves around using the chain to swing the scythe and send it flying at the enemy. From simply throwing it with the hand or twisting the chain around the leg and kicking up to send the scythe flying at the enemy. The chain can be incorporated to bind the enemy and then to strike and kill them with the scythe.
Background and Roleplay InformationHistory:- Spoiler:
Makai was born on November the 9th in a small village. However ever since he was born Makai had always been an odd individual. He was not the same like other children as a child he never cried he was always silent often worrying his parents. His eyes had strange snake like slits in them and ever since he was young his face was always neutral his eyes held not a shred of emotion as if from the first moment he was consummated he hadn’t been born with any emotions what so ever or they had been sealed deep down inside of him from the beginning just waiting to burst. Makai was always treated cruelly by the villages and other children being believed to be a demon thanks to his eyes. The odd thing was when makai was five years of age he stumbled upon a strange substance that erupted into an electrical storm when it died down Makai was holding an odd double edged scythe that seemed to grow with him as he aged.
Makai spent most of his childhood in doors reading books or training with his strange powers testing it out in the forest. trained himself not only mentally but physically through numerous training exercises that tested him at every twist and turn. He trained his body and his magic which he discovered when he was 8 years old allowed him to use electricty which originated from his scythe. Facinated by this he trained with this scythe in an attempt to master its power. As he trained with this electricty his body changed to the point where he would no loonger be harmed by electrical shocks or even if he was struck by a lightning bolt
When Makai was fourteen his parents left to visit some friends in another village. They had asked Makai to come but he refused and decided to stay home. During the week they were gone his family was attacked by Bandits. When he found out oddly he didn’t cry at all none of the villagers could see the hurt or tears that day he was deemed a monster and the villagers did all they could to kill him. However on his sixteenth birthday something happened that changed his life. Makai found himself walking through the village square for some unknown reason only to be confronted by the villages stating he had lived long enough and charged him with numerous weapons.
that day Makai snapped his scythe released a large electrical charge and he shot forward beginning the massacre. The next day exorcists of the black order arrived to find Makai was seated on a pile of corpses from Akuma corpses on the body to human on the top eating an apple. The Makai turned to them and in an instant he attacked the black order members killing five finders and an actual exorcists killing them internally with his electricty, of course at the time he new nothing of Akuma and exorcists. That day Makai became known as Chi Basu Makai or blood bath Makai.
Makai travelled the world killing anyone that came after his head. Time began to pass and Makai acquired two new scythes the Jigoku no Shinzoku and Tenbatsu. At the age of 20 Makai had gained two more names for himself the Reaper, Shi no kama no Makai (Makai of the Death Scythe) and Gyakusatsu no ō (King of the Slaughtered). He earned the name the Reaper as he was like death itself as he never let a single soul alive when he attacked killing everyone that stood against him. His fourth name King of the Slaughtered was gained from killing around 10,000 members bandits in a single day and night all all that remained of the camp was that for some reason electricty was running through the camp and from the sheer amount released didn't die down for a full week
Though as time began to pass and he reached his twenties he began to calm down and discovered something called Akuma hunting him after his scythe saying it held something called Innocence. Makai found himself constantly being attacked by this Akuma but he killed every last on that came after him and has been for the past eight years. His knowledge of the innocence grew over those eight years as he killed Akuma but always asking them questions or coming along finders to discover this information. From these attacks he found out his scythe held something called Innocence a weapon used for killing AKuma and that his had the ability to generate raw elecricty from its core.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Makai stood in the fields looking around with a bored expression on his features. His cold eyes scanned the area as his pitch black hair fluttered into the air as it reached down around his mid back held up in a ponytail. A large scythe attached to his back. A chain seemed to be slipped under his shirt and was wrapped around his chest. He slowly reached up grabbing the massive scythe with ease giving a blank expression as he stared at those that stood before him. Ten Kiri Anbu stood across from him each drawing there swords. The Kasai drew his scythe his chain flying up into the air and spiralling around his arm while the rest struck the ground.
Makai slowly slipped into a stance holding his scythe with his right hand. His left hand raised towards his enemy wind chakra spiralling around it. Makai erupted into black rose petals as he casted his illusion. The petals spiralled around the anbu. Makai appeared in front of them delivering a powerful wind chakra enhanced hit to his opponents chest right over there heart. Blood splattered everywhere as a blade made of wind was piercing through there body. The tips of Makai's fingers in there chest as the blade of wind went right through there heart.
Makai swung his massive scythe slicing the Anbu in half. Makai threw his scythe into the air and grabbed it by the chain. he started to spin it, "Come on trash come and die at my hands. Pathetic Weaklings!" he pulled five senbon from his holster and channelled wind chakra into them. He tossed them at five Anbu. The anbu leapt out of the way but one got hit the senbon going right through his head killing them. Makai laughed, 'This is pathetic come on your Anbu!"
Makai vanished into the shadows. Pythons shot from the shadows flying to the anbu. The anbu swung there swords cutting the snakes in half. One shot forward grabbing an anbu with a raven mask. it dug its fangs into his neck. The Anbu screamed as the snake vanished revealing a kunai. he fell over dead. Makai's scythe flew through the air slicing another Anbu's head off leading six left. Makai stayed hidden in a Genjutsu making them continue to guess where he was.
Five Kage bunshins formed around him. They spread off hunting the Anbu from the shadows. Screams filled the air as Makai and his clones struck. Their giant scythes tearing into the anbu completely decimating them. There bodies were shredded as the scythes ran right through them spraying blood everywhere. Makai flicked the blood off his scythe and threw it onto his back. His clones got to work cleaning the mess up and placing the bodies in boxes and shipping them off to kiri with a message attached "Like i said nothing but weaklings. Next time send someone that at least proves a challenge'
Makai turned and started to walk off. His back to his clones as they took the boxes and left for Kiri to leave them at the front gate. Makai gave a cruel laugh. he jumped to a branch and leapt away heading towards the boarder to the land of wind heading towards Suna. maybe there he'd have a better challenge someone that actually stands a chance against him the rest were all just trash.
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| Subject: Re: Makai Kasai Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:30 pm | |
| Your app is impressive, but I found some major things we're in need of fixing.
We already have the exceeded amount of parasitic anti-akuma weapons, and so I'm afraid I must ask that you change your weapon to equipment. As for it being based on illusions, I find it highly unlikely for someone to have innocence like that, when the actual purpose of innocence is for its power throughout the weapon must touch the akuma to destroy it, which means it must be attached to the user of the innocence. If it were to detach itself into an illusion, that would most likely cause yourself to either die or grow sickly from innocence withdrawals.
When an exorcist uses innocence that is parasitic, their weapons cannot have any powers; they can only be a blade or gun. It seems highly unlikely that you have an indestructible weapon that would have no significant meaning. As for being apart of the devil's soul, that is impossible for the story line, and will not be allowed, due to high amounts of power that are just not needed and seem to be far-fetched for D. Gray-Man.
Exorcists who have parasitic innocence are not allowed to combine with a weapon, because there's no possible way to do so. A weapon cannot enhance someone's parasitic innocence, and since parasitic type is currently at its exceeded amount, and illusion-based innocence is impossible, these powers will not be allowed.
As for the tattoos, I'm not allowing them to hold any special meaning, because there doesn't seem to be any recognition within D. Gray-Man that shows that there are such thing as "Magic Tattoos" unless it is within dark matter of a Noah or an Akuma. To be a General or Critical Point Breaker exorcist, you can only use the power of a weapon, martial arts, and tactics. There are no demons in the D. Gray-Man world, unless you refer to Akuma, because the Millennium Earl pretty much takes the place as the Devil, with his army of pawns.
These are the key things that need to be changed, and will not be accepted on the site, so once these are changed, please inform me so I can look at your application once again. :) | |
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| Lmfao ^ can we call that the failturtle? please?! |
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| Can i just get this rechecked and judgment passed on it |
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